Opening sequence draft 1

The sequence is set around a plot that a young girl has been kidnapped after being followed and stalked(psycotic thriller) we came to a conclusion to do this project as we have a lot of research around this thriller theme such as psycho which this theme can be adopted from.this is the 5th girl to be kidnapped in 5 months ,this may be a serial kidnapper,our idea is obvioulsy very common but we have several techniques we will use to make our film unique.
 The scene begins with a blank screen with speech from a news report being played in the background "it has now been 2 weeks since the sudden disappearance of lucy Stevenson.Then the screen will be switched to inside a news television scene where more info about lucy stevensons kidnap will be revealed "she was last seen after she left her friends to head on home from a college performance".
  After this sequence the reconstruction of the event will take place ,where matthew or clifford will be seen standing outside her college , he can then be seen closely monitoring her movement. He will track her movement until she reaches a dark corner where he will make his move and put her to sleep he will then carefully put her to sleep ,we can see the kidnaper or stalker is experienced in this field as with no hassle he knocks her into unconsciousness and then she is dragged into a car but evidently we can see she leaves her phone as she had previously tried to contact the police.                                         The scene will then be enhanced using different techniques such as over the shoulder camera shots from the stalkers point of view,also our missing girl will have her headphones in and is totally unaware of anything until a certain point where it may be too late. (After most of the action there will be a quick cut montage which will create more suspense also we are yet to touch the sound area but this will without a doubt greatly improve our task.
The sequence will end with a sad video of her friend made by crimestoppers to help any witnesses to come forward to stop this psycotic kidnapper from doing this again to anyone .The fact that she is a girl means that she is more vunerable and is a key character in our plot